关于签证方面的翻译，请帮忙修改一下

从**名

??Mary,

　　

　　John hasn't reply my email sent on 2nd Feb, could you contact with him or provide the below ***rmation:

　　

　　1. The date when he will arrive at XMN

　　2. The city where he will apply for visa at

　　3. Will the three months twice-entry visa with 30 days stay each entry be ok?

　　（为您申请三个月内二次入境，每次可停留30天的签证可以吗？）

　　4. Objective（来访目的）

　　5. The scan copy of your passport

　　6. Your occupation, is a manager or an engineer?

　　7. Name and address of your company

　　8. The address where the express of invitation letter could reach you（邮寄邀请函的地址）

　　

　　如有需要修改，请指出，谢谢！

宋**的

小小建议一下。

　　

　　Mary,

　　John hasn't reply my email dated 2nd Feb, could you please contact him or provide the below ***rmation:

　　　　1. The date he will arrive at XMN

　　　　2. The city where he will apply the visa from

　　　　3. Will the three months double-entry visa with 30 days stay per entry be ok?

　　　　（为您申请三个月内二次入境，每次可停留30天的签证可以吗？）

　　　　4. Purpose of the t**（来访目的）

　　　　5. The scan copy of his passport

　　　　6. His occupation, is a manager or an engineer?

　　　　7. Name and address of your company

　　　　8. The mailing address where the invitation letter could should be sent to（邮寄邀请函的地址）

旁*的

John hasn't reply my email sent on 2nd Feb, could you contact with him or provide the below ***rmation:
　　　我觉得应该是the ***rmation below