【转贴】医药论文英文摘要中的常见错误与评改

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关键词：常见错误

　　１、医药科技工作者撰写医药论文时一般要求附英文摘要，英文摘要写得准确与否，很大程度上体现了作者的学术水平，也与论文的影响力有很大关系。我们有幸从《医药导报》杂志社获取了相当数量论文的英文摘要原稿。该刊特邀英文校译——同华中科技大学同济医学院冯新为教授，年逾九旬仍伏案笔耕，为这些稿件做了大量细致深入的校译工作，可谓句句汗水字字珠玑。给医药科技论文英文摘要的写作提供了一个范本，对广大医药科技工作者来说也是一次极其珍贵的学习机会。本刊特辑录刊载其原文及冯教授所作修正、点评，以飨读者。

   　2、编制体例：本文按照原文、修正、点评次序编写；修改、插入处以黑体斜体，删节处附括号说明，如有点评附上标数字注明。

　　1、 原文：
　　Determination of Gallic Acid in Zhixueting Liquids by TLC ScanningZHOU Qun1'' XU La-ying2 (1. Department of Pharmacology'' Tongji Medical College'' Huazhong University of Science and Technology'' Wuhan 430030'' China; 2.The Faculty of Pharmacy'' Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Medicine'' Wuhan 430061''China)ABSTRACT Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Zhixueting liquids. Methods: Zhixueting liquids were dissolved by distilled water'' and then extracted into the sample with but** etc. The samples were determinated by TLC scanning (λS=280nm''λR=350nm). Result: The average recovery rate was 96.36% and RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 five batches of samples were 0.38''0.42 and 0.47mg/ml. Conclusion: The method is simple'' convenient and available.KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Zhixueting liquids; Determination; Gallic acid修正：Determination of Gallic Acid in Chuxueting1 oral Liquids by TLC ScanningZHOU Qun1'' XU La-ying2 (1. School of Pharmacy2'' Tongji Medical College'' Huazhong University of Science and Technology'' Wuhan 430030'' China;

　　2.The Faculty of Pharmacy'' Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Medicine'' Wuhan 30061''China)Abstract Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Chuxueting oral Liquids. Methods: The Chuxueting oral Liquid was dissolved in distilled water'' and then xtracted （into the sample删去） with water-saturaled n-butanol3 etc. for the preparation of samples. The samples were subjected to gallic acid determination by TLC scanning λS=280nm''λR=350nm). Results: The average rate of recovery was 96.36%''（and删去）RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 （five删去） batches of samples were 0.38''0.42 and 0.47mg/ml respectively. Conclusion: The method is simple'' convenient and feasible.

　　KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Chuxueting oral Liquids; Determination; Gallic acid

　　点评：
　　1、zhixueting 应为“止血停”而非“出血停”，自相矛盾。“出血停”也可译为hemorrhage-stopping，以方便国外读者理解。

　　2、school可作“（大学里的）院”解，原意是“药学院”，而非“药理教研室”，故改之。

　　3、斜体n表示“正”。

　　2、原文：

　　Content Determination of Emodin in Qingre Mingmu CapsulesLUO Ming-zhu1'' ZHANG Hong2 (1.Hubei Provice Institute of Drug Control'' Wuhan 430030'' China; 2.The 75310 Medical Team of the Army)ABSTRACT Objectives: To determination content of Emodin in Qingre Mingmu apsules. Methods: Tlcs was used'' silica gel Tlc plate'' developing solvent was Benzene-Ethyl fermate-formic acid-Methanol-water(3:1:0.05:0.1:0.5) of which the upper olutionλS=435nm''λR=530nm. Result: The linear relationship of sample application which ranged between 0.168-3.09μg was good. The regression equation was below: Y=105417.7X-1115.6'' r=0.9995; arerage recovery was 100.53%'' RSD=3.38%. Conclusion: This method is simple'' accurate and convenient.

　　KEY WORDS TLcs; Qingre ming mu Ccapsules; Emodin修正：

　　Determination of Emodin Content in Qingremingmu1 CapsulesLUO Ming-zhu1'' ZHANG Hong2 (1.Hubei Provicial Institute of Drug Control'' Wuhan 430030'' China; 2.The 75310 Medical Team of the Army)ABSTRACT Objective: To set up a method for the determination （content删去） of Emodin content in Qingre Mingmu Capsules. Methods: In the TLC assay'' a 0.5% canboxymethyl cellulose sodium (was used删去) silica gel G plate and a developing solvent with a mixture of benzene—ethyl formate—formic acid—methanol—water(3:1:0.05:0.1:0.5) as the upper solution were used.λS=435nm''λR=530nm. Results: A good linear relationship was found when the sample amount (which删去) ranged between 0.168-3.09μg （was good删去）. The regression equation was as follows: Y=105417.7X-1115.6'' r=0.9995.The average rate of recovery was 100.53%'' RSD=3.38%. Conclusion: The method is simple'' convenient and accurate.KEY WORDS TLC; Qingre Mingmu Ccapsules; Emodin

　　点评：

　　１、中成药名用斜体书写，也可译作removing pathogenic heat to improve acuity of vision。

　　3、原文：

　　Research on The Acute Toxicity of Huning CapsuleXIN Zhi-wei'' ZANG Zhi-he'' MAI Xiao-xia'' FENG Jun'' YANG Wan-qing'' LIAO Hong-li (Teaching and Research Section of Pharmacy'' The Third Medical University'' Chengdu College of PLA 610081'' China)ABSTRACT Objective: To observe and test the acute toxicity of Huning Capsule on Kunming mice after an i.g. Methods: Count the death cases of mice in 7 days after the i.g. and work out the LD50 of Huning Capsule. Results: The LD50 of Huning Capsule on mice is 3981mg/kg.KEY WORDS Huning Capsule; Acute Toxicity; LD50修正：An Experimental Study of the Acute Toxicity of Huning Capsules1XIN Zhi-wei'' ZANG Zhi-he'' MAI Xiao-xia'' FENG Jun'' YANG Wan-qing'' LIAO Hong-li (Teaching and Research Section of Pharmacy'' Chengdu Military Medical College'' The Third Military Medical University'' Chengdu 610081'' China)ABSTRACT Objective: To observe and determine the acute toxicity of Huning capsules (on Kunming mice删去) after a single
intragastric administration in the mouse. Methods: 50 Kunming mice were randomly divided into

　　5 equal groups'' with 10 animals in each group. A single dose of 7500'' 5630'' 4200'' 3150 and 2360mg/kg-1 of the content of the capsules were administened through a gastric tube to each of the mice of the 5 groups'' respectively. The numbers of the deaths of the mice within 7 days were noted down and the mediar lether dose (LD50) of Huning Capsules was calculated. (Count the death cases of mice in 7 days after the i.g. and work out the LD50 of Huning Capsule. 删去) Results: The LD50 of Huning Capsule in mice was 3981mg/kg. Conclusion: Huning Capsules have only a minor acute toxicity. It is therefore safe to use the drug clinically. Further study of its toxicity in long-term application is required.KEY WORDS Huning Capsules; Toxicity'' acute; LD50
点评：

　　1、“呼宁胶囊”也可译作antitussive and antiasthmatic capsules